Feedback by Lauren Wilson:
Overall, the blog is quite lacking in posts. Due to there only being nine of them, this excluding the two feedback posts. For the amount of posts, the quality of the work is actually quite high.
The colour scheme on the final front cover for the magazine, is nice and eye catching. This meaning it can attract the audience well, so well done on that. The masthead is also nice and bold against the background, and the main image.
The front cover could do with some more items being placed on it, such as; a barcode, a price tag, and also the date. Also the use of photoshop skills are slightly lacking on the "Leeds and Reading logo", due to part of the logo looking eroded, and part of the 'g' on the top row being missing. Some of the font on the page could also do with being more entertaining, and fun to look at.
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