Double page spreads

Final Product:

Teacher feedback

My teacher has recommended that I should add more pictures to my contents page. However it is not conventional to not have more than one picture of the same person in the contents page. This means i need to take more pictures. I'm also going to add more detail to some of the features.

Feed back

Very nice photos and the layout are nice I like how you have added about Leed’s festival. It’s all very nicely organised. If I was to improve it I would maybe look at the font of the text because it is very spaced out but overall I think it is very good and i don’t think the font is a massive issue. 

Katie Smith  

Contents page feedback

Strengths: I like the layout; it's easy to read and eye-catching. I also like the way in which the same colours run throughout the contents page, which shows that it's neat and easy to follow.

Areas For Improvement: You could add more pictures and maybe more page numbers to show more of the things that would be included in the magazine. The title of the contents page could be bolder, as it sort of blends in with the rest of the page when it should stand out a bit more.

Other comments: Overall, nice layout! I like the style.

Peer Feedback by Zoe Oglesby