Strengths: I like the layout; it's easy to read and eye-catching. I also like the way in which the same colours run throughout the contents page, which shows that it's neat and easy to follow.
Areas For Improvement: You could add more pictures and maybe more page numbers to show more of the things that would be included in the magazine. The title of the contents page could be bolder, as it sort of blends in with the rest of the page when it should stand out a bit more.
Other comments: Overall, nice layout! I like the style.
Peer Feedback by Zoe Oglesby
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